I took a step.
We took a leap.
I got startled of the hurdle.
We conquered it.
I had a fall, I tumbled.
We climbed steps in step.
I was worried of the result.
We came of it.
I had an apprehension of future.
We were confident.
I was worried for the tomorrow.
We were celebrating.
I was gloomy for the sorrow.
We were treasuring it.
I was always a question.
We were an alibi to it.
I was judgmental, gave a verdict.
We analyzed it.
I was pink, I was green.
We were ripened in concert.
I was uncertain who you are?
You were my reply, resolution.
To the every question posed.
Together we were the solution.
We took a leap.
I got startled of the hurdle.
We conquered it.
I had a fall, I tumbled.
We climbed steps in step.
I was worried of the result.
We came of it.
I had an apprehension of future.
We were confident.
I was worried for the tomorrow.
We were celebrating.
I was gloomy for the sorrow.
We were treasuring it.
I was always a question.
We were an alibi to it.
I was judgmental, gave a verdict.
We analyzed it.
I was pink, I was green.
We were ripened in concert.
I was uncertain who you are?
You were my reply, resolution.
To the every question posed.
Together we were the solution.
11 comments:
hey thats also a good one..yaar u r doing brilliant workkkkk...keep it up...
@ janvi
thanks from preets :)
arey aap bhi...kya baat hai...
chalo acha laga ki apne apney busy schedule se hatke kuch kiya...heee heee..
nahi seriously its a nice poem...but i think u can write much better than this if u start spending some time for it...
u definitely have potential....
me jst waiting for this blogger to get uploaded with ur work frequently...
both u and deepi are going preety well...chalo main bhi kuch chota mota shuru karuga ap logo se ashirwad leke....
hi dear...great job yaar ..lovely poem...now me waiting for some more inspiring blog...
wow..
i have no words..
very rightly said...
"we"
awesome...
the feelings very true and very honest..like u didn;t write it..but just put ur heart b4 the reader..
keep writing..
@Shiv
Thanks dear. Great to see your comment
Will try to be regular in posting !!
@Neha
Thanx baka. Will hopefully come up with something with which u all can relate too !!
@Matty
Thanx dear for those encouraging words ... :)
bbyee!
this is to deeps.
IF U R ALIVE PLZ MAIL ME!!!!
as a person of my level o horizon.... it is mind-blowing.
how could u do dat ?? what made u pen down such a post. yes, dis is a serious question o mine. i wud be pleased if u can anser dis one.
@ karthik
just saw your this post today. I will ask preets to answer this questions of yours; she wrote this poem
@ deeps
oh.. thanks a lot deeps. ill be looking forward to it...! thats really an excellent work o hers, jus excited to know what inspired her to pendown such lines... :)
hwy preets....
nice work Miss...gr88 to c someone daring to do good in poetry...must say..good work...
keep them coming....
tc..
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